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01/28/10
Nice fun story.
01/28/10
LOL! Ah, the dreaded GPS stories. I think most of us can relate to this in one way or another. I like the other acronym for GPS though, good one! A nice light read. ^_^
01/28/10
Very funny! We've had our own fun with our GPS.
01/29/10
I don't know who you are but STILL I could see you chuckling every time you wrote "U-turn." LOL. What a fun story.
01/31/10
HUH? indeed! Can't think of anything that would make me go "HUH?" more than a whacky GPS. Great story, well done.
02/01/10
sounds frustrating. Good application for the topic. Even if it was fiction, I'm sure a lot of GPS users can relate.
02/01/10
This happens pretty much every time we use a GPS! Nice little piece of humor with a good reminder that a prayer is always in order...and maybe a U-turn is a good idea!
02/01/10
How true that we all talk back to our machines when we're frustrated! Fun read!
02/01/10
We've had quite a few "huh?" moments with our GPS.. Very creative for the topic.. and a lot of fun!! :)
02/01/10
Oh! I can relate...funny and great ending.
02/01/10
Totally believeable!
02/01/10
At least they could laugh about it! It was NOT funny when it happened to me when driving in the snow for the very first time!

Great story!
02/03/10
Really cute; gave me a bunch of giggles.
02/03/10
An enjoyable read. We certainly should go with God's direction rather than the GPS! (",)
02/03/10
Funny, Cute, Well written. The Lord certainly does work in mysterious ways.

02/03/10
Hehe, fun story. My GPS can be interesting sometimes, too. If I hadn't known it was about a GPS ahead of time, I think the dialogue might have been confusing. Perhaps putting the GSP in italics or something could make is more clear. Otherwise good job.
02/03/10
GPS's can be either a real headache or a lifesaver! Looks like it was both for this couple. I've never heard our GPS tell us to take a u-turn, but the utter goofiness of the machine in the story makes it all the more humorous. Great "huh?" story!