The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so lovely. I felt transported to a moment of enduring love and comfortable companionship. Vivid description, heartfelt slice of life. Tremendous!
A man of few words, huh?
Beautiful! I like the gentle flow of the poem. Your descriptive words helped me to see what you wanted to convey.
Beautiful tribute to enduring love. Well done!
Love this...had to read a second time. Beatifully written!
awww, this warmed my heart! I'm no judge of poetry, but I loved the flow and feel of this. Beautiful scene
I immediately pictured one of Thomas Kinkade's paintings...all those little cottages in the woods with soft light from the windows and smoke coming from the chimneys...beautiful words, beautiful portrait!
How very sweet and romantic. Lovely gentle words throughout. Thanks.
What a beautiful, romantic poem. I felt a quietness in my heart as I read it. Well Done!
You've got this "free verse" thing down down pat. I love your beautiful words and the tenderness in your words for your beloved.
No words necessary when his life "says it all." I enjoyed the warmth of this poem.
There's true sense of warmth that radiates from this poem, inviting the reader into the lovely scene. Very nicely done.
What a lovely and tender poem! There are some emotions too deep for words. Well done.
I loved it.
This is beautiful; I would love your cottage!
Beautiful, inspired by a deep love and a gentle soul.
This is absolutely beautiful.