The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
This story took an unexpected turn. I loved your ending.
Wow! God is so awesome to bring about reminders from long-gone loved ones just when we need it.
01/22/10
Very well written. I was inside Jane's head. Great devotional.
01/22/10
Loved the voice. The narrative flowed so smoothly--I felt like I was there "listening" to the MC tell the story. Great job.
01/24/10
Whoa. You told the most important message there is to tell in a very readable, if sad, story. Great job!
01/25/10
Wonderful storytelling and powerful message. Perhaps my favorite story this week. Thank you.
01/27/10
Wonderful writing, Leah! Love the "hook" at the beginning--perfect.
A really wonderful devotional story with the truth of God's forgiveness stated clearly.
01/27/10
Great story,God is always right on time.
This is one of the best entries I read this week. Perfectly wonderful.
Smooth flowing, good dialogue and great descriptions. I admit shedding a tear for the MC. So many angles in your title. Well done Leah.
I really liked this. It was well written and held my attention all the way through. Terrific.