The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
Funny and touching.Well done.
01/25/10
Precious characters in this one. The one piece of advice I have is to read your dialogue out loud to check for sentences that don't flow like a normal conversation. Great slice of life about a hard subject.
01/26/10
The interacton between the lttle girl and Poppie was priceless. Some reworking of the story for more insight to what was going on with the father would be helpful. Keep writing.
01/26/10
Cute story on a sad topic