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Every harried mommy can relate. Very clever story.
I've made that first mistake too many times! And always, I have to slam on the brakes and start over.

Well done is showing all the typical chaos that so often takes over our lives...and we wonder why.

Great conclusion!
I too like the conclusion, good writing.
I can identify with days like that! Good writing.
What a delightful "Mom moment". I smiled all the way through it. I do believe all mothers who don't have a nanny can totally relate. Maybe a nanny or two feels your pain as well. I enjoyed every single word.
Ohh, the pain of that day! Had my attention all the way through.
I could totally relate to this, I had way too many of "those" days myself.
Good job writing it.
I kept going back looking for #1. Aha, I got it at the end. Great big oops. Well done. Patty
Great pacing, great voice. Loved this entry.
Very well done.Boy, could I relate to this one and i had to laugh. What a lesson through the story but the ending wrapped it up nicely, and reminded me to put Him first. Great job!