The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/10
The entry has a very good message.

I was a little confused as to who the letter was written to and from, and why--but that became clear by the end. The "oops" phrase seemed a little out of place, or forced.

Very good teaching within the letter. Almost like reading one of Paul's letters.
01/24/10
Even before you mentioned Timothy, I was reminded of Paul's letters to him. The writing is a mix of formal and casual language; maybe sticking with one or the other would be better? Just my opinion, though. I found this a great example of encouragement and instruction from a mentor to a young Christian.
Interesting take on a letter from Paul. I know someone named Mei!