The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/10
The writing was good, and the story moved along at a nice pace.

I wasn't particularly thrilled with the POV. The story was very good, but having it told from the baby's perspective--who hadn't even been born yet--was a little confusing.

Love the blessings from the grandpas--a great tradition.

01/24/10
I have a story about my adoption (at six weeks) that I could tell as if I remember it because I've been told about it so many times. Cute story!
Enjoyed the story and the added ethnic flair! I could hear the strong Italian accents and mannerisms.