The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/10
My apologies that the story doesn't show the line between the paragraphs. The original was double spaced and paragraphs were indented. Talk about OOPS!
01/26/10
Your descriptions, especially in the beginning, are VERY vivid. This is a clever piece. Enjoyed it.
01/26/10
I've sat in on many board meetings, and believe me there have been many oops recorded. Well written.
01/27/10
Didn't get the last 'oops', especially given the definition of 'oops' given earlier, didn't match that last one. Overall writing was good though.
01/27/10
I was intentionally using "oops" in a slightly different context than previously covered in the article. Obviously it didn't work perfectly. I appreciate the feedback!