The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Interesting but predictable, a couple a major grammar errors (gerunds do that to us) and some modest POV problems. A good edit and this will be a keeper.
09/05/05
Entertaining and enjoyable. If only I would have thought of 'half-way there' birthday parties, my husband would have gotten one in March. I especially appreciated the humor of the strange look her friend gave her. 29 again?
09/10/05
Sweet and funny. I like your ending sentence.
Cute and enjoyable. 29? Should the Spitit lead read "A BIG 50" and "I'm Not Over the Hill" on my site. 29?