The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/10
Having been part of a prison ministry in California, I can appreciate your story. Well done.
01/27/10
Enjoyed the story I really did. I just think it's a very sad commentary about our society today that equates murder and sin as 'oops' moments. A little separation between paragraphs would make for a smoother read.