The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the take on this Bible story. Very interesting to read it from this POV. I was wondering how you were going to work the "oops" in--very clever.
I enjoyed this very much. Some wonderful understatement. And the use of the Company conjured up images of Prison Break or some such, all very fitting. My only doubt with your story is whether it's really an Oops. But that said, it's creatively pushing the boundaries
One of the most creative takes on the topic I've seen this week. Well done!
Very creative version! Would have loved to see your characters witnessing the exorcisms and earthquake!
You are a gifted story teller.
Just a touch of mystery,surprise characters,all very well done.