The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/10
I'm sorry the pastor set you such an unenviable tusk before you all - one that could easily denture pride! But fangs very much for your enjoyable mix of rich, vivid descriptions of the world underwater and your honest humour about church life.
Very well written.
01/25/10
Beasutiful description of the under sea life. Well-written denouement.
01/25/10
I love the descriptions of underwater beauty - breathtaking. I confess that the adjectives tripped my eye a few times - perhaps trimming a few would have tightened the whole. Wonderfully elegant humor. Lovely!