The Official Writing Challenge
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Who knew you'd get to share that story on the internet!? ROFLOL!!! Wonderful descriptions! Great treatment of the topic! My favorite phrase: "a Secret previously only known to Victoria and me."
Nicely done! You actually made me feel embarrassed for Debbie. Oops is right :)
01/21/10
A Secret previously only known to Victoria and me---ROTFL indeed. Thanks for sharing.
I didn't see it coming at first but then I thought,"Noooooo." :0) This is too hilarious. My kids were playing a game and paused to hear me laugh outloud and asked,"Mom, are you alright?""0)
I have had very similiar situations and this cracked me up. How embarassing. Great believeable setting and dialogue. Thx for writing this humorous piece. I sure needed it!:0))))
01/25/10
Wonderful,compelling characters. Well done.
01/27/10
Very good, good job.