The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
"They were just a year from retirement." How tragic and confusing yet what a legacy to leave behind among the post cards. I'm sure they heard "Well done." when greeted by the One they served. Well done.
09/05/05
Tragic indeed. Put spaces between dialog for ease of reading. Well developed story nonetheless.
A touching story. Loved the ending. Thanks for sharing!
09/09/05
A well told story. My only negative comment is with fine-tuning. Proof-Reading. You start the story with Corinne who morphs into Sally mid way through the story. A little confusing for this reader.
09/10/05
I'm not clear on who Sally is...but this is a good story! Very timely.
01/23/06
*Author's note*
I apologize. I accidentally uploaded and saved the incorrect file - thus the morphing problem with Corrine becoming Sally. I apologize as that wasn't very "advanced" of me! :) I will not make that mistake again!