The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/10
Didn't quite get what the first "oops" was about. But this is definitely a topic that can have a lot of "oops" in conversations. Very thought provoking.
01/22/10
Interesting theme and cast of characters. It seems a little rushed, (like there wasn't enough room...bother that word count, lol). What an oops to let out...yikes. Thanks for sharing!
01/23/10
Good job, but I think the real "oops" here is the way they reacted. With worldly jokes and no thought for what the need here is.
I got a little confused about the oops, but the story was interesting. I think the ending could have included something about Christian values, like she went to him apologizing. Just my own thoughts.