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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Oops (01/14/10)

TITLE: The Curse of the Broken Glass- An Autobiographical Self-assertion
By Rachel Rudd
01/17/10


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”What did you break now?” my husband cries as he bursts into the kitchen.

“I didn’t mean to do it.” I whispered as I searched for the small broom and dustpan. “It just slipped out of my hands.”

“How is it that you manage to let go of things that you are holding just a moment before?” He takes me by the shoulders and turns me to face him. “I love you, and I’m not mad at you. I just can’t understand how you can manage to break so many pieces of glass.” He looks at the pile of shards stacked up on the dustpan. “The last flowered plate, huh?”

“Yeah,” I moan. “The curse strikes again.”
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If I didn’t know any better I’d say that our house has a curse. Glass doesn’t stand much chance of survival here while porcelain has to count its days. Bits and pieces of broken remains have littered the floor in our living room, our dining room, and especially our kitchen.

The day our second child considered making his entrance to the world, a casserole dish-the one inherited from my husband’s English grandmother, yes, the one his grandfather had fashioned a wooden holder for-fell prey to the blight of our household. I didn’t mean to do it. I really liked that cute little dish. It was perfect for a cozy meal for the two of us or for heating up leftovers, but there’s just no stopping this pestilence!

At least six dinner plates, six cereal bowls, two large mixing bowls, and a whole set of dinner glases have fallen prey to this menace. Now, you might accuse me of wanting new dishes or of having butter fingers, but it is simply not the case. I tell myself to hold on, to remember the thing I am holding is breakable and I must exercise caution. However, thoughts of the movie I saw the day before invade my mind followed by plans to remake the leftovers that are in the refrigerator trailed by thoughts of the whereabouts of my one year old and oops….another piece of dinnerware is put to rest.

According to the Bible we are no longer under the strains of the Old Testament law but decay and ruin still remain in this present world. We yearn in our hearts and creation groans all around us to see God’s glory revealed in full splendor and for His kingdom to be established. I long to sit at the wedding supper of the Lamb of God. There my mind can remain focused on Him and the glass in my hand well, will remain unbroken. Freedom from the curse…at last!


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Sara Harricharan 01/22/10
This made me laugh, because My Mom seems to do the same thing. I can very much relate to the broom and dustpan routine. Thanks for sharing this piece! There's a good message tucked in here.
Janice Fitzpatrick01/23/10
Very cute. Relateable piece. Thank God that He loves us no matter how many things or even lives we have contributed to breaking or chipping. He offers us hope in Him, mercy and forgivness. I too have broken my share of glass, that's one reason I invested in Corelle years ago, grin, but there's still several chipped dinnerware that probably tremble at the thought of my hands reaching for them. They are the lasdt of the bunch I must add.:0)) Well done. Enjoyable piece.
The Masked Truelovers01/23/10
Thanks for your could-be embaressing honesty. And a good conclusion regarding how all our imperfections will disappear when we finally meet Him face-to-face.
Allen Stark01/24/10
Due to my wife's advanced arthritic conditions, she has very limited use of her hands and I find myself picking up many things, including broken glasses, etc. However, it is always a reminder to me how God picked up the pieces of my broken life years ago and let me marry this wonderful woman. Thanks for reminding me of this.
Noel Mitaxa 01/24/10
"and porcelain has to count its days." I loved that line, along with the inexorable path of destruction you've outlined: memory of a movie; plans for leftovers and curiosity about a one-year old's whereabouts; all contributing to another dish's downfall.
Is this a confession that multi-skilling may not be a purely female preserve - or would that be adding too much "gravity" to the issue?
Good fun stuff!
Francy Judge 01/26/10
Great story. You're a talented writer.
Glynis Becker 01/26/10
Beautiful reminder that things will never be perfect for us here. Thanks for sharing this great read!
Patricia Herchenroether01/26/10
A humorous devotional! Who'da thunkit? I was delighted to read this well-written story.
c clemons01/27/10
Interesting tale, not sure if I agree totally with the ending. A lot of good one-liner descriptions though, keep writing.
Carol Penhorwood 01/31/10
Thoroughly enjoyable tale that I can relate to as well! And God knows us so well and loves us in spite of our "weaknesses". After all, we are just "jars of clay" and His strength is made perfect in our weakness. Each time that happens, it should be a reminder of that, right?


   
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