The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
Cute!
I enjoyed the paragraph where you wove the song lyrics in with her thoughts and recollections. Nicely done!
...well written, and a cute love story in the making. There is someone for everyone.
01/24/10
Beautiful! And, yes, I can relate also.
01/24/10
Thanks for the fun and the pun in this story, and for the optim(etr)istic note it closes on. A good light touch.
01/25/10
Way too cute. It seems you had a lot of fun writing this one. I certainly got a giggle reading it. Nicely done.
01/25/10
Very enjoyable read!
Fun read, through and through! Well done!
01/27/10
This made one LOL. Excellent writing too boot. Proof that you don't need to be deep and oh so philosophical, just writing for the fun of it sometimes.
01/27/10
I could so relate to this story. Well told, well paced.

Trim the adverbs and trust the dialog to convey the expression on the faces and in the voices of your characters.

Great storytelling.
01/27/10
Fun Fun Fun!
Loved your characters' names!
Cute story.
This is so cute and I love the characters' names. I could see all these things happening very clearly. (maybe because I'm related to your Ida) A great entry.