The Official Writing Challenge
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I did not know what a Pantoum was, but figured it out as I read the poem. WOW! That must have taken a lot of time. And it is so true.

Should be a winning spot!
01/26/10
You took this difficult style of poetry and created a great message for your readers. I'm still clapping for you. Great use of the topic.
Ahhh -- a master word smith is at work here. Well done.
Very masterfully written and poetically picturesque. I think I like the pantoum style. Fantastic.
01/27/10
Congratulations. You've tortoise what a pantoum is. If it were set to music, we may also 'hare' it as the Pantoum of the Opera!
But thank you for your clear portrayal of the pantoumonium that comes our way if we aren't in tune with God's grace.
Very clever and well done.