The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
Funny. I had the same astonished surprise when I ate there! Your story was a real hoot!
01/21/10
LOL!! I thought my 'oops' entry would be a most embarrassing moment story and now I see I am not alone.
Very well laid out and not lacking for detail. And good on you (if this is true) for turning your oops around to your advantage!
01/21/10
Very enjoyable piece! Thanks for the giggle :)
01/22/10
LOL! I had to giggle when I read this. Poor Lois...heehee, the title does fit...
01/23/10
Well done! :-) I hear the food is delicious, but I think the chain gets as much coverage out of stories like yours as it does for its lack of coverage! Yours was the best I've heard yet! :-)
01/24/10
Great! Loved it! We all need to laugh more.
01/25/10
Great read and certainly fits the subject well! Loved it!!
01/25/10
Too funny! And very well written. You had my attention from word one. Great job. Thanks for the laugh!
01/27/10
Good job with re-telling the story. They do say "top of mind awareness" is key in marketing.
01/27/10
O'm'gosh! What a great story. Many times have I removed foot from mouth after such a blunder. I guess that's what happens when you don't keep up with the latest jargon. I love your entry.