The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Just the reason I'm not buying a Wii. I found this entry interesting as I read along and saw myself in the same shape.
Then I got to the end...and it made the piece A+.
very well done!

mona
01/17/10
Good syory, but the twist at the end was superb.
01/17/10
LOL! We just got a Wii, and I so relate to these two. It's amazing how much action you can get from a TV and a receiver. Somebody's a rich genius!
01/19/10
No pain - no gain! Being sloven where exercise is concerned, I might have opted for the pill - may look better with more dark hair. Enjoyed. Thanks - Colin
01/20/10
Clever,Loved the ending.
01/20/10
Great piece, we have a Wii, so I can totally empathize.
Loved the unexpected ending!
Hmmm--wondered if I wanted a Wii...now not so sure. Loved your story.
01/20/10
Oh, I get it... I think! (Can you tell I've never used a Wii before??) An enjoyable read--good job!
01/27/10
Superb! Loved the twist! I was so into your story and was taken by surprise! (Think I would have opted for the PILL!)
OW!