The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Ha Ha Ha! Love it. Ain't it the truth? :)
01/14/10
A couple of typos on an otherwise interesting tale. Loved the structure of your first sentence. Also, enjoyed how "OW!" was most effective at the end!
Don't you hate it when you're around someone who responds, "whatever"?

mona
01/15/10
I liked the contrast in personalities in this fun story. In this case, the nice one does come in first. Thumbs up to you.
01/16/10
Great story! Nice to see the nice one get ahead. :)
01/17/10
Yes, glad to see the good girl gets the doctor this time! Very entertaining story.
01/18/10
Nice twist at the end there. Loved her little attempt at self promotion (and hint), "I'm nice."