The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/10
Not sure who the voice is here. I sure hope it's not the pastor. A few mistakes here and there, keep writing.
01/18/10
Your POV is great... Whoever this is obviously is under the tutelage of God as they realize their pain isn't as bad as...

Nice work, good message.