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01/14/10
Mended is one of my favorite words, like grace. Something about being whole again.
I loved the life in this story and how you told it in a special way.
Beautiful and deep. Worth pondering a little more...

Mona
01/17/10
This is beautiful! Full of love and emotion, yet that little ache that comes along with life, and all the challenges and loss it can bring. I really could relate to this parent/ child scenario.
Beautiful story. The message of God's care for us like a father really came through clearly
01/20/10
Lovely illustration of grace and free-will. Ah, the courage in being a loving parent...
01/20/10
Wonderful descriptions! I really liked how you compared the father's love and care for his daughter to our heavenly Father. Perfect ending!
01/20/10
Beautifully and skillfully written. You left my heart aching yet joyful. Great work!!
01/20/10
Very good! I could relate very easily to his protectiveness for his daughter. I wondered what he was trying not to think about.
01/20/10
A well written story. What a great dad. I too wondered what dad was thinking about.