The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/10
A few gaping holes here and there, i.e., why there was no help for her on road. Although it may be the writer's view that riding a motorcycle at forty is childish, millions who do may not agree. Keep writing.
Oh how we try to retain our youth... that scripture really hit home. Thank you.
I do have one question: If she could walk home, why did she need an ambulance?

Great writing. Keep up the good work.