The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
An experience I think most, if not all, can relate to. Thank you for sharing yours. I like your easy-to-follow down-to-earth style of writing. This makes a wonderful devotional piece.
01/14/10
Good story telling and use of scripture. I had a little hiccup whne I got to "invited them in and exclaimed over the care package." When I say hiccup it usually means it stopped me and made me go back to re-read. I'm not sure what's wrong, maybe a missing word. Overall good writing and train of thought.
01/17/10
AMEN...AMEN! This is incredible! Of course, it's exactly where I'm at right now in my own life. Thank you.
01/18/10
Needs a little smoothing out in places, but overall a good job.
01/21/10
I sense personal experience here, so thanks for your encouragement. A very good friend in a very significant faith ministry told me how easy it is for him. "All I do is pray real loud when I know there are rich people around!" I pray you will keep seeing how God keeps on surprising and reassuring you with his blessings - and how he is blessing others through you. (And through your entry He already has!)