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01/15/10
Love this story. A good reminder to not jump to conclusions.
01/17/10
This is SO sweet-love the characters and the reminder to not be the one who assumes too much.
Cute story! I was thinking Scotty was a cat.
01/18/10
Very funny, especially with the splats and plops as the peaches rain down. Nice twist with her 'judging' the neighbors and getting it all wrong.
01/20/10
Oh we are so quick to judge.
Bless Scotty's heart. Loved the piece.
01/20/10
Hmmm, Judge not, lest ye be judged. How quick we all are to think we have all the facts and the right to come to a conclusion. Thanks for a good reminder. Well written.
Great fun---Great twist---Great story.
01/20/10
A great slice of life story! You made your characters real, and gave us a great example of "judge not". Loved the raining peaches scene. :)
01/20/10
A fun story that's oh, so true--how easy it is to judge a situation before we understand it! Well done.