The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Ouch! I was waiting for more...good job drawing the reader in...I wonder how you answered the young woman's question. :-)
01/15/10
Very nice! Great use of the topic and piercing message.
01/16/10
Good job of stepping on a few of our toes here. Munch! Wonder if I have any cookies left?
Ouch! Great work.
01/18/10
What a great lesson here. Good thing my sin isn't as bad as that other person's. Ha!
01/18/10
Interesting, I was waiting for the error of the MC's ways to be changed. Overall good writing.