The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Oww! is certainly a very efficient word. Very cute poem.
01/16/10
Love this! especially the "status quo" line! Fun stuff and great poetic form!
01/17/10
"Ow" is a much used word in my house! I have the clumsiest body alive, I think. In fact, look up what I wrote for this Challenge after the all-clear, and you'll see I speak the truth!
Poetry scares me like an evil clown.

But you put a smile on my face and wiped my baby tears.

It felt like you should recite this to the kids in my 1st and and 2nd grade Sunday School class, and then we could easily discuss the spiritual application of pain.