The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Well done! I especially enjoyed the redemption theme - how a person with a sinful past can still be used by the Lord, if the rest of us are willing to forgive.
This is a beautiful story of love and forgiveness. Watch out for POV shifts, and framing dialogue in quotations. I love the restoration that came betweent Lana and Anna-Leigh--absolutely gorgeous!