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01/14/10
Love this dialogue, because you have also shown Balaam to be an ass. (Well, hee-aww, hee-aww, hee-awwlways strikes me that way!)
01/14/10
Great retelling of this story. The dialogue is fun and it seems to fit the topic of 'ow!' perfectly :)
So this brings up a question I've thought about off and on: Wasn't a donkey talking something out of the ordinary? Balaam didn't seem fazed at all by it.

That aside, this is a great POV for the story. Keep up the good work.
01/21/10
Very good Clyde, I recently was studying about who "The Angel of the Lord" was. I found it to be very eye-opening. As usual you think out of the box, good job.