The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Cute and clever! Good job.
01/15/10
Cute! About halfway through I thought maybe these were animals but I was thinking dogs so the ending still surprised me.

You have some beautifully poetic descriptions in your piece.
This was really cute--and I didn't pick up on the cat part until the very end...so had to read it again! Nice job and I especially liked the title.
01/16/10
Awesome! This one is definitely in my top stories for this week. Great writing with an excellent pace and rhythm. Well done!
I was totally surprised! That hardly ever happens to me so when I find it, I love it. Great job!!!
Creative... Perhaps italicize thoughts to set them apart would help. I enjoyed this very much, esp. the surprise ending. ^_^
01/18/10
The ending caught me by surprise too. I didn't see it coming. Cute story!