The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
So well written with the ending a great surprise! If only more animals could find homes like that.
01/14/10
So very well-written and held my interest. At first, I thought, perhaps a child. This is an excellent piece on a difficult subject to work a serious piece from.
As a dog-lover, I appreciate this so much. As a writer...I'm in awe.
Mona
01/16/10
Very creative and thought-provoking. "Since English was not his first language" was a clever way to set the scene and also throw us 'off the scent.' Well done.
01/17/10
Clever and sweet!
At first, I thought it an adult, then a child, then a senior citizen. Powerful and heartbreaking.
Wow- this was really very good. It held my attention and I didn't figure it out until the very end. Great job.