The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Very funny - I could picture these two perfectly!
Freaky! Fun!
01/17/10
This would certainly qualify as "ow"! Poor Marvini--he needs more than a new act. ( :
Fun story-felt like an old Abbott and Costello routine.

I am only a beginner writer, but I think you are missing quotatation marks for the dialog.

Pete and Gladys-reminds me of an old, old TV show!