The Official Writing Challenge
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Expertly done! I just love your sweet poem. And what a perfect fit for the subject of "owie". The ending was pure genius as well. Congrats!
So tender and beautiful!
Isn't that the truth!

Grandmas are wonderful but no match for Daddy God!
Congrats on your placing. A very sweet poem, a little twisting but rhyme was very good.
In Christ, we are all God’s children. The abiding comforting reality of that is pleasantly presented in this noteworthy poem. Its strength resides less in words chosen than in lasting impressions given, to all fortunate readers, regardless of age. Good poetry invites you back again for another look; this poem invites you back again and again – especially if experiencing a personal state of “owie.”

Congratulations, Lisa, on your exceptional 3rd place showing among other talented competitive offerings.

Congratulations Lisa on placing so higly with this beautiful poem. Vince.
Congratulations on placing! Great writing.