The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a great story. I figured he would have the injury no one heard.
This would make a cute ballad!
01/14/10
Very good—excellent lesson included.
01/15/10
Well written and certainly fits the topic. Fun read wrapped around a good message.
01/16/10
Wonderful work on this! Love the poetic form!
This is just beautiful. Like Beth pointed out, the poetic form is splendid. And it carries an instructional message. Once again, this is beautiful.
01/16/10
Funny! Loved the twist there, and the lesson woven into the poem.
01/17/10
Poor Willie--but he had to learn his lesson at some point!
01/21/10
This poem is very nicely done...and has a very good message. Congratulations on being Highly Commended on your level, and your placement in the Editor's Choice!!!
01/21/10
Congratulations on being "Highly Commended"--a title well deserved on this piece! A great poem with a great lesson!