The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Thanks for that message. Good strong rhythm, too.
01/17/10
Amazingly beautiful!

If it weren't for the trials of our life, would we turn to Jesus? I'm certain I would be puffed up in pride because of all I would achieve without His aide.

Bravo! I love your heart in this.
01/18/10
Obviously, this is something you shared from your heart and your experience. I enjoyed the flow of the poetic words and the cadence. The encouraging message will speak to others going through the same pain you face.
01/18/10
Really excellent poetry with a wonderful message
01/20/10
Thank you for sharing your own experience so beautifully and meaningfully!
01/21/10
A very thought-provoking poem, indeed. Nice job.
01/21/10
Another beauty for your bookmarks, Carol.
01/23/10
Carol, thanks for your very nice comment on my story. Yours definitely deserved to be placed as well. What a beautiful and inspiring piece.
01/26/10
Nice rhythm and flow in this piece. Good job.
02/13/10
Beautifully written!
Great message!
02/19/10
You have certainly touched a chord of truth with what you've penned here. I so truly believe as Maya Angelou has said "I know why the caged bird sings". This stanza from your beautiful poem sums my thoughts up perfectly
"Through this pain has come my writing,
A source of pure delight,
A way to thus encourage
Giving others hope to fight.

Loved your work and its message!