The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Your writing engaged me from start to finish. The miracle of birth was described so tenderly, and the love between the parents was felt by this reader. Great job.
01/15/10
Took me right back to late April 1991 when I was the person helplessly encouraging my wife through labor.
01/16/10
If this doesn't win recognition, it should! Absolutely awesome writing! So very well done!!
Beautifully and tenderly written.
01/18/10
You did a remarkable job of conveying what both parents-to-be were feeling during the labor process. This was such a tender story and I especially liked the last sentence.