The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Lovely word pictures, soft and gentle.
Beautifully written. I enjoy finding the beauty in wood and obviously, so do you. This is worthy of a good mitered frame.
01/15/10
Beautifully written, wonderfully worked, finely drawn!
01/17/10
Obviously wriiten with holy care...the words flow as in song and paint a classic portrait! I really loved this
masterpiece!
I think I heard gentle guitar playing in the background, Beautiful piece!
Beautiful!
01/18/10
My father-in-law was a carpenter who took pride in his work. While reading this lovely story, I could envision him as the carpenter painstakingly working through the night. Thanks for sharing this well written poem.
01/19/10
Wow, wonderful! - really enjoyed reading these lovely words. Colin
01/20/10
I could smell the wood shavings. So very well done.
01/20/10
Your use of words is so skillful and beautiful. I loved reading this!
"savory scent of the sawdust mist" Wow! I can hear the music of the saw all the way through this poem. I love it.