The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Interesting take on the subject...and very unique poetry style.
01/14/10
The unusual format fit your lyrics very well. Good choice, I could hear the guitar and the castanets in the background!
Catchy lyrics. Could see this as a video. Nice job.
this was a HOOT! Loved it!
Great rhythm here...and a good message as well.
01/18/10
The flow, cadence, rhyme, message were ALL powerful. Great message. I liked the uniqueness in using this week's theme.