The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/09
This is a creative take on the topic with ethnicity of the people being the "colors". Your ending is heart-warming.
12/16/09
I'm with Lisa on this...more, more, more! Wonderful work that seems like it could be an awesome short story with some unfolding of the back story of the MC and the Preacher. Nonetheless, extremely vivid and realistic descriptions of the church, down to the out-of-tune piano :).

Very nice as usual Larry!
12/16/09
This is great, love the rainbow of wonderful characters.
12/16/09
I agree with the others - and I want to turn the page for the next chapter. Compelling.
12/16/09
A little bumpy meaning the consistency was lacking, specifically with the colors. Has promise if fleshed out a little more. Keep writing.
12/16/09
Yep, me too - I liked and enjoyed your real to life account in this interesting story. Colin