The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
I 've had memories of holding babies and children that I wanted to remember (forever). Your beginning brought them back in a flood. (especially now that none of them are within approximately 200 miles of me). :( I remember those books! This warmed my heart, made me smile, and then rejoice over your beautiful message. I have a Sunday School class… I think the kids would LOVE this! Thanks for the idea! … and great name for your MC.. :)
12/11/09
So glad someone thought about the Wordless Book. Great story.
Using the wordless book was such a great idea. Nice story and well written. Well done.
12/12/09
Sweet. I really liked how you tied the colors into the world around us as a reminder of the wonderful wordless book. Very nicely done.
12/13/09
This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing this!!
The title works for me. The story is right on topic, well written with a great message.
12/15/09
A wonderfully sweet story which I really enjoyed. My mind did get distracted a bit at the wordless book bit which reminded me of a similar wordless book titled "What Men Know About Women".

Colin