The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/09
What a lovely allegory--would be a great discussion starter for late elementary and early teens. Well done!
12/17/09
Allegory or not, still a few places that didn't flow, a little polishing and I think this will be good.
I really enjoyed this charming story about that brave little girl.y only thought was that she and the bullies seemed older. I think it would be a great article for a Christian Tween magazine. I liked how the little girl handled the conflict. Often when adults write for kids, the adult on the story comes to the rescue, but in your story the mom did just the perfect amount of encouraging