The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/09
I loved your first line. The personalities of the colors were so apt. Violet's lesson made me think of the Body of Christ. Thanks.
12/15/09
This would be a good Sunday School handout!
12/16/09
Great work, great fun, great message! Thanks for sharing this, it was a delightful read!
You did an excellent job with this. I'm sending praise and a prayer for you.
12/16/09
loved the line ... "Red had the decency to blush ..."
great message.
12/16/09
You managed to add character to each of the colors in so few words! A fun story - would be good for kids I think (or the young at heart.) :)
01/11/10
Great job with this and congratulations on being tied for 13th place in your level and ranking in the top 40! Did you see the Writing Challenge Message Boards?