The Official Writing Challenge
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I was going to be very angry at you over that buck, but your ending redeemed you! LOL Really good writing.
Being an animal lover, the end wasn't so positive for me. Great writing though - excellent!
I, too, felt bad for the deer, but considering it is for food and not sport....

I cringed at the explecatives and cursing. Is is necessary?

So what happens next? I want to hear more!

I've been around hunters and your descriptions are right on. Your writing and word choices always amaze me. Beautiful story!