The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
I love your title! Kaleidoscopes spin to reveal different colors. While there was no evidence of anything spinning physically, certainly the MC's life is spinning in a whirl of confusion and despair. Good job.
12/14/09
I love your title (talk about a salsa word). :) You've written this perfectly and the song lyrics punctuating the story is masterful. Great work on this!
12/14/09
Very well spun tale :-)
12/14/09
Sparkling title!

Clear and clean writing, the mark of a wordsmith.
Beautiful story...I want to hear more!
12/15/09
Well done Kim. A beautiful use of the title and the topic. I too loved the weave of the song.
12/16/09
I love great writing intertwined with wonderfully familiar songs. Powerful entry and beautifully detailed. Great job!