The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/09
You have a very intriguing story line, but I feel as if it is just beginning. Where's the rest? hmmm? You have me caught up in wondering what the code of many colors is.
YES, tell us more! I enjoy reading christian suspense stories.
A good beginning. I wanted an ending to make it complete.
12/16/09
Awesome beginning of an intriguing story. The use of color throughout was somewhat veiled, but loved the flow and mystery.
12/27/09
This is ultra creative! Would LOVE to read more of this story. Do you have more "Wallace Mysteries"? Such a clever idea. I really enjoyed the "Joseph" aspect of this and the "Code of many Colors" You get the creative-inspiration award with this! :)