The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun, fun, fun! How DO they come up with those wild names for nail polish anyway?

Nicely polished piece! (pun intended) I could picture everything.
12/10/09
thanks for taking me to the salon with you. These girls days out are fun. anyway i liked this story. did notice typos. "An flowing" should be "A flowing." You have an opulent where I think you mean as opulent. I wasn't sure about "kiss on the chic" I'm thinking it should be cheek but what do I know? Still it was well-written and I enjoyed it. I'll chalk up the typos to not wanting to muss your manicure.