The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow-- this was really well done. I agree with Lisa: a very different perspective and one worth considering...
Intriguing story. Awhile back, I read a series of novels on the Amish way of life so gave me a greater understanding of the MC's overload!
12/14/09
Your title makes sense after reading your story. You made me see the outside world through your MC's eyes. Great work!
12/14/09
Very interesting perspective and great writing. Outstanding effort!
Great viewpoint and well written story. I enjoyed reading this.
A very revealing and creative perspective on the whole commercialized Christmas experience and how it can take away our peace. Very well done.
12/17/09
I'm trying to figure out who Christie was and how Rebecca knew her. I don't know much about the Amish but it doesn't seem likely that Christie was Amish so it didn't ring very true to me.