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Wow-- this was really well done. I agree with Lisa: a very different perspective and one worth considering...
Intriguing story. Awhile back, I read a series of novels on the Amish way of life so gave me a greater understanding of the MC's overload!
Your title makes sense after reading your story. You made me see the outside world through your MC's eyes. Great work!
Very interesting perspective and great writing. Outstanding effort!
Great viewpoint and well written story. I enjoyed reading this.
A very revealing and creative perspective on the whole commercialized Christmas experience and how it can take away our peace. Very well done.
I'm trying to figure out who Christie was and how Rebecca knew her. I don't know much about the Amish but it doesn't seem likely that Christie was Amish so it didn't ring very true to me.