The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
Awesome...this is wonderful! What a terrific explanation for the things John was given to see. Good work!
I felt like I was standing right there!
12/11/09
I really liked this.Thanks for this glimpse into what it would be like to hang with John on Patmos...intriguing story and uplifting ending.
12/12/09
This is so beautifully written! My heart responded to your description of The Light, although my brain just can't wrap itself around that glory. Thank you for sharing this.
12/15/09
A wonderful way to decribe the indescribable, without the promise being reduced by John's honest difficulty to fully communicate it. I like how you have emphasised the relationship more than the scenery itself.
12/16/09
Very good, on topic and content is excellent writing. Good job!
12/17/09
Congradulations Clyde, it actually placed higher in my book :).