The Official Writing Challenge
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What better place to see all the world's colours than at the olympics - good setting for this poem. And yes, the colours and beauty waiting for us, unimaginable.
Awesome tie in from the Olympics to the race of the faithful--good job. I don't really see any glitches. It has a nice flow and covers the topic.
Refreshing look at the topic. I like the image of the Olympics as a symbol for our own "race" to the finish.
This is a very awesome poem...I liked it the first time I read it, and on second read it is still just as good. Thank you by the way for your kind words about my writing.